Although the house is not very big, it is very comfortable, is located in the center of the city of santa barbara, which makes me able to move everywhere and I have left all very close such as EF language school.
The house is very comfortable, I live with 7 men and 8 women, all very sympathetic and the atmosphere in the house is very pleasing.
we have a very large yard, the house has two floors, where they divide the men from the women, the women on the first floor and men on the second floor.
the dining room is very large, so we have to be able to sit all the time for dinner or breakfast.
too large the living room because there we all got together to study and also to watch TV together.
It is a pleasure to be here helping to wonder not so much our country of origin and also to our families.
Great writing!! :)
ResponderEliminarJust a few small corrections:
"which makes me able to move everywhere and I have left all very close such as EF language school."
- It would sound better to say "and I have everything very close to me, such as EF language school"
"the dining room is very large, so we have to be able to sit all the time for dinner or breakfast."
- It would be better to say "so we are all able to sit at the same time for dinner"
to say "have to sit all the time" sounds like you are being forced to sit there all day! :P
"too large the living room because there we all got together to study and also to watch TV together."
- It would be better to say "The living room is large too"
- Since this sentence is present simple tense, you should say "there we all get together"
Great job! Good description and writing style, and I'm happy to hear you like your place of residency! :)